Remember When Harry met Zoe?

Continuing this stroll down memory lane, I'm thinking back to the second book in the series.


Lost Legacy remains one of my favorites of all I've written. And this scene is one of my favorites from it. 

Pete tucked the phone into his pocket as Zoe and his father appeared in the doorway. She gave him a guilty grin.

Pete held up a hand. “I don’t want to know.”

“But—”

“You didn’t lose Pop. That’s the main thing.” In fact, his old man looked almost—perky.

Harry nudged Zoe. “Do I still get something to eat? I’m starved.”

“Sure. What’ll you have?”

“A milkshake. Chocolate.”

Pete snorted. “That’s not exactly a healthy lunch.”

Zoe planted her fists on her hips and narrowed her eyes at him. “It’s still too early for lunch. This is...brunch.”

Harry nodded in fervent agreement. “Yeah.”

“Chocolate milkshakes for brunch?”

Zoe dropped her stance and leaned down to Pete’s ear. “At his age, if he wants a milkshake, I’m buying him a frigging milkshake.”

Why is it one of my favorites? Simple. This scene was taken straight from my heart and my memories of my own dad. It makes me smile every time I read it.

Here's a tidbit you may not know. Harry was never supposed to appear in any other books. It was YOU, my readers, who hounded me into bringing him back. For that, I thank you. 


Comments

Jeanie Jackson said…
I love Pete and enjoy Zoe's interaction with him.
3/15/22, 5:53 PM
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